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First and foremost donβt tell us all this nonsense at the start just discover them as he goes along. second donβt give something to take it away. if you have to take it away donβt give it in the first place. Third learn how nature and bloodline releases work. Fourth donβt give your character 100 abilIties or talents give him one that makes him special as the MC then the rest is just character progression. Finally, and this was the final straw for why I stopped reading. If youβre going to pick a different village actually come up with plot and relevent stories that make us attached to the character. Donβt skip his friendships and connections and then get confused when no one cares that they die. The entire bell test is pointless because the whole time all i can think about is how stupid this contexually is. It took me 30 seconds to think of a test where he had them search through the village and track him like tag in a certain timeframe. Even if youβre lazy anything is better than a copy paste of storywise content that does not fit.
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