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Comments of chapter undefined of Suna's Shinigami (Version 1: Flawed Version)

Pimple_Face_13
Pimple_Face_13Lv4Pimple_Face_13

How did I only realize at the end his name is David but with a r

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ValkoWolf
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what was the point of reincarnation if ur gonna seal his memories on day one just because he went on a rant that lets be honest here was written by the author so author why make ur mc rant then take away his memories for something u wrote ????

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

this is stupid...this era was during the wars[ one already happened and already theres tension]...you think that shinobis let alone elders like chiyo would feel sorry for some random kid, especially if he was found with no memories and was an experiment? and let him walk to an orphanage or around the village instead of taking him in to interrogation or something? really? tbh the timeline and starting in suna is something that extremely dope and would be a cool FF, especially the underappreciated characters like chiyo. all very cool and interesting but the execution is just retarded.

Ranbov_D_Myes
Ranbov_D_MyesLv4Ranbov_D_Myes

Did Chiyo not investigate about the experiments in the sand village? Chiyo looks relaxed seeing a child being the victim of an experiment from a sand village.

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NoHaremSectLeader
NoHaremSectLeaderLv10NoHaremSectLeader

so whats the doujutu and kekkei genkai my favorite kekkei genkai is the kaguya clan because i mop the floor with bums on storm 4 with kimmimaro

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NoHaremSectLeader
NoHaremSectLeaderLv10NoHaremSectLeader

i just noticed the title and the title of the novel picture are different so which ones wrong and which ones correct history stronger loner or....

Draigon
DraigonLv11Draigon

Garbage

Yrmynoodlescold
YrmynoodlescoldAuthorYrmynoodlescold

Readers, could you let me know how you found this book? (I mean how you managed to stumble into this book. Was it discover or did you search it up) Thanks

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Drake_san
Drake_sanLv3Drake_san

interesting start

MonkeResurrection
MonkeResurrectionLv2MonkeResurrection

How can the mc live however he wants if the system sealed his memories then isn't the notion before about reincarnating and to live however one wants just a scam and not true at all, also what's the point of reincarnation without memories, you should've just made an original character and not reincarnate someone if he doesn't really know anything about the plot.

DaoistKVKRiM
DaoistKVKRiMLv1DaoistKVKRiM

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Invincible
InvincibleLv13Invincible

Why complicate it so much, just give him the Sword and Luck, it's all one needs to reach apex, there are so many different techniques, even only in Naruto, if tou covered it enough you take it to the Kenshin's... That's just lame, to have so much powers... And you have to creat some overpowered enemies, just lame...

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

ThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanks

Hussein_King
Hussein_KingLv2Hussein_King

Won't he feel guilty for not saving people like Naruto's parents or the uchiha wen he gets his memories?

ZAHID_HASAN
ZAHID_HASANLv5ZAHID_HASAN

don't give him memory back only important events he will remember when time comes it will be best and thanks for the chapter author san more chapter

ruinreader
ruinreaderLv5ruinreader

thanks for the chapter 👍 need more that's was an interesting start and unique story good job

MUH_ALHAM
MUH_ALHAMLv3MUH_ALHAM

I am sad to hear the story