FalloutNerd
Enjoying and excited for the book, it's been good so far. Got to ask tho, is the current pace gunna be consistent through the whole story or just until he gets to hogwards? Feels like your speed running your own fic =p It kinda feels like the above chapters were a quick intro, whilst the real story is gunna start from here.
Some advice. The violence was too much. Not because i don't like it but because even in a world with dragons, wizards are civilised and not like some wuxia guys. Also too much manipulation too fast. I get that you're eager to get the ball rolling but the power he has now feels unreal even for fiction. This power that he has now doesn't feel like his. We don't get any of his thought process behind his actions. This makes for a bland character. You may have built his tools but not his personality.