Comments of chapter undefined of The Summoner's Rebirth: Awaken, Milady
The Summoner's Rebirth: Awaken, Milady
illeannne
Chapter comments3
thank you for the chapter. uwaaa. the details and extra characterization are nice, but it kinda feels like you wrote yourself into a pit where too many checkboxes need to be ticked before you end this arc and have it receive proper closure. for example, 2 chapters ago there was a reaally long winded explanation where it was explained a bit too thoroughly why xenos is a threat and needs to be eliminated here and now. while this is nice, i don't believe in requires an entire chapter and probably could have been accomplished in way fewer paragraphs.
T^T Noted, will be mindful of it. My writing style is generally like that for all of my stories, but I see your point. I do tend to explain everything a bit too much, or skip everything a bit too much. I know this isn't an excuse, and I will cut off the nasty parts whenever I notice it. I went ham on Xenos because I want the big guy to be a (somewhat) major part in this volume. I won't disclose on what exactly, but I want them to be close. P.S: I also do plan on rewriting the entire novel, (I already edited 100+ chapters in my app), so this problem will hopefully be fixed in the near future. I've noticed a lot of criticisms about inconsistencies and such, which I desperately want to repair lol >_< Thank you for reading as always!