Comments of chapter undefined of The Last Blood Elf (Completed)

why did the story take such a turn it doesn't make sense how did we go from making fun of umbridge to evil mind raping Dumbledore that caught me off guard and is ruining the story for me cause it feels forced

When he somehow benefits from this and goes after Dumbledore is so beautiful.

Hate to break it to you but Im already broke on powerstones

Thanks for the chapter, I hope that Cross betrayal of the tree of life doesn't effect him too much in the future! I wonder when both he and Luna will wake up!

Cool, now post another one!

Interesting..... so luna will now be an elf as well, she should grow in power quickly with Cross teaching her, I’m curious as to who the tree of life meant by Castle of “Him”, I’m betting Merlin but that dosent follow canon, but then again this is a fantastic fanfiction, so you do you, I do have one request though, that you maybe think about involving the Fae courts, summer and winter, perhaps as a way to aid him in progressing further into his “god hood” later, an alliance between the two courts and the returning Elves could make for a decent Twist, giving Cross allies

Did you guys really Not like it? :(

this is great work... truly great....Thanks for the chapter

in all honesty i am liking it so far but i wanna know what caused dumbassdoor to switch so abruptly

thanks for the chapter but i wanted to watch dumbleknob get smacked

oh bowy... the storm is coming

Love it. Burn it all. 🔥

WHO IS "Him"??????????????? SHE DIDNT WANT TO KILL HIM AND RAHTER HELP HIM. SHE GAVE HIM HIS FINAL PUSH

thx

So is the element of life ever gonna be useful or did you just add it cuz it seemed cool to add. Because it seemed like it would be very useful here like why did he have to do this ritual. Couldn't he just use the element of life to I don't know force some life force out of the Earth or I don't know maybe Force his own life force into her body like what's the point of it then.

i dont understand how he betrayed the tree?

badass

Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍

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Thanks for the chapter!