Comments of chapter undefined of The Last Blood Elf (Completed)

dude why do you want to create another Harry Potter and is that they don't have common sense didn't he survive on streets for that long why would he trust someone so easily

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I don't like this its boring

i hate when the mc foolishly exposes his abilities to people he heve just met

But isn't saying that he's elf can make him a guinea pig or slave?

ok dash how he survived like he is ruthless, smart stuff and it's a good novel (htf he trust easily and use his power. is he really have bloodline memories htf he surprised about wandless magic as elvs basically wandless )

I loved it, as a normal person, I think this was great. The others in here complaining abt the chapter sound like psychos. 😂 Keep up the good work! 👍

i had some expectations for this but now felt like i was punched in the face thrown down a flight of stairs. welp good luck author this isnt for me

uhh, the starting chapter is not really that great, it did not feel good actually, im confused if either the MC is naive because of his age or is he smart and mature than his actual age and appearance for having survived in the streets... 1 thing is that his thought were that of a self aware person and i thought he was mature for the way he talked to grumble and by reading his thoughts but his actions are contradictory to those factors and he acted naive and idiotic without common sense and was not aware in the danger of exposing his abilities like that.

This was quite good for a first chapter, if only he didn't cry in the end then it would have given much better noble vibes.

Not a bad first chapter, looking forward to what comes next, thanks

too much...

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. . . . . .

ok that was ruff but I have high hopes

loser

hard to read, writing is not fluid, im dizzy

oooh!!! this was actually a HP fanfic!!!

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Do not cross me. pun intended