Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

This came out of nowhere ..... but a nice surprise I guess...... . thanks for the chapter 😊 .

So worth the wait! I think that THIS is the best among all your novels(and I did read them all(you're a fantastic author)). I also wish good luck to Asuma if he ever wants to satisfy Kurenai ever again.

Hmm, not bad. But not very canon friendly. It's true she got together with Asuma after the Chunin Test, but they were 'good' friends for a long time. And only because she was grinding to become a Jonin for awhile, she didn't get together with Asuma before. Still, it's not a bad chapter. Just not my taste as how she was portraited.

Great chapter hopefully add to harem plan dont see asuma pleasing her anymore lol

I dropped the novel here because the last 2 chapters were forced and irrational. Without any basis, she questions the strength of someone who is guaranteed by the Hokage himself, and then she just cheats on her boyfriend with a 13-year-old boy, I just can't swallow it. It was good until then, my other comment about it had been deleted by the author so I'm posting this one again.

Its good but I hope it’s just a one time thing and not a relationship that had no back ground

Poor Asuma...lol

I didn’t expect a second chapter today thank you very much.

gracias por la sorpresa... algo realista que ella no sea virgen como la retratan en muchos fanfics de naruto... bendiciones y gracias.

creo que el capitulo debio ser mas largo, mas descriptivo sobre los detalles, como se veia kurenai, ponerte chino en sus descripciones como si fuera en camara lenta, luego agregar mas dialogos mientras estan en el coito, fue un poco aburrido y monotono si no hubo expresiones de kurenai como gritos y gemidos durante todo el proceso, luego deberias explicar y describir paso a paso las acciones y sensaciones que siente el mc y kurenai, y por ultimo y no menos importante, deberias haber hecho que el mc se tirara a kurenai 2 o mas agujeros ( gatita, trasero y boca), pero fue un buen cap, solo recomendaria que leyeras mas limon de novelas fanfic extensas, como naruto: ultimate maken shinobi, ese es mejor estilo para limons para tu historia

30cm? that was using the arm? lol

It’s dark 😔

Kuranai for the HAREM please

I don't like harem, but it's still tolerable, they just impose it too much and it doesn't get interesting, it's like the black elves in the new Lord of the Ring

I didn't expect anything like this .....like AT ALL.... THANK CHAD FOR THIS GIFT🙏🙏

best chap so far

Exp

Mirai is now his daughter