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I like more the style of madara of fighting, dodging, deflecting attacks and counterattacks. more, some techniques of eyebrows
thx 4 the chap
The idea is good, but its implementation is not, this narrative from the third person spoils everything
Thank you for the chapter But out of curiosity. Will the MC learn medical jutsu or medical knowledge from the "naruto" system?
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I think they shoud not have make him lose him lose one piece memories or it will only be connon story but the concept and writing is gud so okđ
I thank you for the chapter.
He should learn medical ninjutsu, also there are no ninjas in the world of One Piece so people should not be aware of people walking on water and associate them with ninjas. They'd probably associate it with devil fruit abilities.
Until this gets edited im gonna have to pass.
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Thanks for the chapter!!
thanks for the chapter.
use words like pain or hurts instead of just hurt
Thanks for the chapter on a good story
Thanks for the chapter ! đđ
Thanks for the chapter peek!!!!! Keep up the amazing work!!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!