Meh
it was good until he began Making R-18 if it was only one it would be okay but then the rest of the Chapters turned into hentai .... .....
I gotta it had potential but it just went downhill way to fast. Like there was androids from dragonball to in black clover. How does that even make sense?
Lets start with.I like those author who write and create anime fan fiction .especially I'm a Black Clover fan too. and I like to read fan fiction of anime. Second the story development is okay but I don't like the MCs personality like hey he's cold yes but I don't like the way he's getting a harem. because madara isn't like that.The Uchiha's only have one wife till the end. But here is he have so many wives. ! I can accept him having a harem but I got annoyed when the MC have a relationship with a nun. That's why. It's only my opinion. but I like how the MC treated those fucking royals and bitches novel. That feels great. Third is I don't like how he treat asta and yuno. Because in my expectations he will be friends with both of them and start their adventures and fighting stronger enemies and helping each other. I have a bigger expectation, but still*sigh*
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Please let the bitch noelle out of his herem hhgggbbbhgghhhhgghjkkjggffggbhhhggfghjjjhgghjjjggghjjhggggghjjhggghjjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I deleted my past review bcuz I could see the notable improvement in later chapters compared to the earlier ones, the book still has a lot of flaws but it's good
This fanfic is a masterpiece.its so good and enjoyable The characters are good and the plot are also good. PLEASE don't DROP this because your doing a fine work that deceive a vote. Keep up the good work
IF THERE WAS EVER A BOOK THAT HOOKED ME ITS THIS, The development of the story arc and the characters is fabulous (not too much to be boring, not too little to be unsatisfying) it has me on the edge of my seat my expectations are flipped to a total 180ยฐ, the fight scenes are incredibly detailed to the point where it's like im literally watching a big blockbuster move which is just up and in your face yes there could be a bit of improvement but it's those imperfections that make it perfect, I refer this book and author to all my friends and everyone I know, just wonderful.
i like it gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddddddd
Really rushed and badly written. Mc is supposed to have madaras power and attitude yet he acts completely different like some retard who forgot all his anime life after the transmigration.
Average story, Writer Make him(Madara) way more op than should be, I feel bored half way the story but sorry I can't read anymore. My advice is - Don't make MC ultera powerful because there is no room for MC growth in story and make the story boring because there is no room for suspense.๐
I love it very very very very very very very very very very much.. Amazing story, Character development and impressive plotI love it very very very very very very very very very very much.. Amazing story, Character development and impressive plot
This was a really really good read and I really hope that author continues writing
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The problem for me is not the harem but the personality of the MC, it seems that in every fight he likes to talk about how he is stronger, he also keeps stalling to defeat the enemies, if he is stronger, he will soon defeat the enemy he doesn't keep having internal monologues about how he is more powerful than his enemy, another problem is this need to keep the canon for no apparent reason, you took the powers of a character like O Uchiha Madara, which created a lot of expectation, but your MC is a young Chinese master who likes to brag, lets the MC's actions speak for him, his MC only seems to use his brains to build his harem, takes advantage of knowing girls' pasts to get them, and I have no problem with that but for other situations your MC looks like those classic muscle head character, which is very annoying, good luck with your story
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Very good story, might not be everyone's type of story to read but I recommend giving it a try anyways cause you might end up liking it.
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