webnovel
avatar

Comments of chapter undefined of From Fairy tail to Multiverse(dropped)

altalt

From Fairy tail to Multiverse(dropped)

ZEN_F

Chapter comments8

Author liked the comment.

Shadow_XYZ
Shadow_XYZLv4Shadow_XYZ

Too much emotion shown in the fight and don't be offended but the cliche lines you wrote there are cringe.

3yr
5

Author liked the comment.

Shadow_XYZ
Shadow_XYZLv4Shadow_XYZ

Keep up with the work man. As you can see roman is not built in a day. Just keep writing and you will achieve what you want. Goodluck to your journey.

ZEN_F:it okay, as i right now just started to write novel, i still trying and error as you can see from fairy tail uni volume ...my writing is completely diffrent with my one piece uni volume. thank you guys... atleast i knew what wrong in my novel thanks
3yr
3

Author liked the comment.

kurosive
kurosiveLv6kurosive

def agree there are grammar issues def recommend using Grammarly i use it all the time its free and can fix a lot of the small grammar issues that will make the novel much better :)

3yr
4

Author liked the comment.

Kotasume
KotasumeLv3Kotasume

good but there is a little grammar error

3yr
3
Zarc_Dragnero
Zarc_DragneroLv3Zarc_Dragnero

In fact, now chapter 2 is the most banal chapter I have read in my life. First, without a precedent, I look around a chicken to Phoenix, And the West is something that it knows Haki armament and observation. And a chicken from a magical world and she is also talking. I do not have high hopes for the novel

3yr
2
El_Rasskull
El_RasskullLv4El_Rasskull

[img=recommend]

2yr
ZEN_F
ZEN_FAuthorZEN_F

thank you man,that will be great help for me

3yr
Login