Comments of chapter undefined of In A Marvelous World With DnD Books

Why do he needs all this stuff anyway.. can he just go to school in muggle clothes.. his a teacher not a student and he has is back pack why does he need a trunk....

This chapter was disjointed and difficult to follow, not to mention the inconsistencies with timing and age of characters.

Ok, you need to explain alot about HP world. I mean, are Harry and group 18? Dumbeldor is alive? What about the war ? Do they still go to hagwart at 11? And the angel part !! What ? Why the hell did she say she loves him ? was it just the high of emotion or what ? You said he wasn't being controlled or confounded, then what was that cat eye spell ? Was it legilemance and why ? What the Hell was wrong with Hermoiany and will she be in the Heram ? Will you punch the F out of Ronald ? please do . Will angel be in the harem because it will be pity if you don't add her . Or someone from HP. Her ,if she is narccessa, and Raven darkholm Please don't add the girl that went with Raven to his grove.

WARNING I do not recommend the R-18 chapter....it will make you loose respect for the story!

can't wait for more

I put a chapter in the Auxillary Section to read when you reach the Angel Part, its a *** scene so read if you want or don't.

he should get a ring of Mind shielding

Awesome chapter as always

What’s narcissa home situation like?

soooo, we going to have a new chapter or trouble is happening in your life author?

awesome story bud! im really looking forward to the next chapter and how he deals with dumby dork

Thanks for the chapter

I'm just gonna say I rly hate the hogwarts magical world direction there are so much ways this can go wrong now no to mention it's a bit jarring with the marvel universe I think it's unnecessary to add it but w/e

Will MC live at Hogwart, what about his grove?

Can you add the link to the image here. You can’t copy the author’s notes. I am guessing this is 4th year HP. And maybe students start off later than 11 years old, or they mature faster because magic.

Author you know you can add images into the paragraph/chapter comments right? No need to send a link

Thanks for the chapter