Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel's Osmosian
Marvel's Osmosian
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I think this should be the first and last freakout.Kevin was afraid of his own powers and,limited himself to absorbing matter/energy so he couldn't freak out,but Casper doesn't limit his powers only to absorbing matter/energy,so he should find the cause of the freakout and use the Body Control Power to remove/lock/limit it so it doesn't happen again.
I feel like Superman was really nerfed in this. I mean he has superspeed comparable to Flash (obv not as fast, but the difference is negligible to a non-speedster). There's no way a non-speedster could dodge him realistically. Other than that I really liked the superpowered showdown. The rest of the fighting was entertaining.
you can have him go full Darth Vader for a moment and beat the living hell out of them before laughing his ass off after. they're too arrogant with their power or knowledge Superman and wonder woman are too proud of their power, Superman even straight up disregarding technique Hal being cocky after becoming guardian and beating one of the most powerful being(?) there Batman are still somewhat prideful but not that severe
common this is trash he lost control then why did he even had the ability to control his emotions in the first place then you ruined the the timeline of the team rocket and zatanna wasn't on the team until season two which mean batgirl and beastboy should be here while miss martian should be going mad with mental powers then the MC becomes retard why even fight the justice League why risk things out of controll this whole chapters were trash just delete them continue with the X-Men evolution timeline better you just repeated what you did with the arrow verse in here but more bad this only shows that your running of ideas from the get go then your forcing characters out of the blue like Scott being an asshole while the MC didn't do anything to him or get closer to his one sided lover you seem also to be hampering the MC potential or should I say needing him Far too much he should've stayed with Xavier and trained his powers whole working on technology like recreating the Pym particles to store things while using quantum energy to create boundless range comm for his teammates which he will never share with them at all making algorithm and matrixes programs so he can get rich fast but slowly as every penny he has will be directly invested back immediately so no one knows cesat himself a new identities all over the world incase of emergency you can watch venom movie to try to Incorporate it as the professor decide to take them to San Francisco as there were the movie happen shield gets involved shenanigans happens he meets fury or one of his operatives then he allude to him being a mutate not a mutant and tell him to keep the secret fury agrees but on condition of him owning him which will the MC being involved in the avengers as a descised mutant then you go on bro thi sis just the tip of the iceberg or you can rewatch the underworld Series starring Kate beckinsale then incorporate it it's a clean slate one or do the events of spider man 2 the Rami ones as two takes after the graduation of Peter and mj so yeah there is some ideas if your running out
thank you for the Chapter and for your hard work. the story is great so far. you've improved a lot since the previous version, but, although the MC is no longer an emotionless robot, he is still very cold and impersonal. it is important to remember that we are social creatures. I hope you use this moment of madness to make some sense in the MC and make him trust people more.one thing that bothers me is that he looks kind of power hungry and desperate. I understand that the Marvel universe, even the MCU is dangerous, but the MC is not a fucking steak for every Marvel Op being another thing that bothers me is the mentality of the protagonists to think that just because they are in another universe they are instantly the most important thing for everyone. anyway, I hope that you make the MC more human and more alive.
