Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel's Osmosian

I really dont like the end there, specifically kurt being able to steal from him in the first place and everyone being swallowed up instead of just a few or the mc alone.

The Mc literally said: "Hey look at me, I'm a child and I can create dimensional portals." There are better ways to strengthen the relationship between them, without exposing yourself that way. Although eventually people will know your abilities, the longer they find you better. Thanks for the chapter 🙂

And for people who spent a lot of time pranking each other that was not a prank that was a child playing so it was really forced as ****

I dont like the end at all and i find his progress with his power fucking slow he should be over powered by now

Eh, Im not a fan of multiverse stories in general. Imo multiverse travel should be saved for near the end of your planned story in case you want to keep the character but transition it to another fictional universe. Introducing it so early kinda breaks the immersion for me...Just my opinion tho, I’m sure other people would enjoy a multivErse fic

please have him get angry and rage at Kurt!!!

don't like the ending and the crossover idea man.

Hopefully u can cut the ending and just continue to keep the mc in the marvel verse, but can u make things more real, like alien attacks, mutant kidnapping by the government and also id love to see some shield and stark bashing

Forge's powers is not technopathy its intuitive understanding of mechanical energy combined with his natural genius he can make new technologies, reverse engineer and modify existing ones

Please read whole message before forming opinion on comment I'm kinda meh about this chapter but sometimes you need to use the "railroad" so I don't really mind it with your heads up on it being important for story plot/development Just a thought/suggestion young justice has great team growth moments and they regularly took in people with "not so great backgrounds" so could be a good place for "teamwork experience" despite there main character's team issues

are they going to worm God help them

I am down for a Teen Titans crossover.

Why do you need to bring the team together if he leaves it is there any reason?

goodbye not for me specially the forced ending in this chapter

btw is there a cypher there to absorb powers?

I think that the thing I like the least is all his powers. I'm fine with all the powers related to transformation like Kimura and mistique, and even jeans telepathy and the technomanci. But the cryokinessis and telekinesis is too much and I think it makes the story more boring.

really liking the story so far, lot of interesting things happening. Feels a bit rushed, but idm that much. Did not particularly like the ending of this chapter, mostly because I rarely see arcs like that going that well. Won't stop me from reading, and I am still really enjoying the fic, good job so far.

Good Work

dude this is awesome i cant wait for more