DanteMustDie
I just need to say that it's a little rushed, like all the "save the guy, meet the X-Men, join the Danger Room session"... The first part with his death and the body's memory it was good, because it's not really interesting or relevant, but the later parts I'd say it's a little rushed, a little too many "events" in just a chapter and I don't think the X-Men will let someone use the Danger Room after just several hours of "joining", if it takes some days or so, it will be much better story wise... Nice story though, i really want to see much more chapters