Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Reborn as a Skypiean

That was a shore in itself, well most self inserts just want the MC to die quickly so that they start writing about the good stuff so to speak. This was a surprising chance i guess, not bad. Great chapter nonetheless.

Nice chap, i feel bad for mc. My man did all that just ti get ****ed over by a drunk **** on the road😭😭😭

Well, Our MC seems to be an "ambitious" guy with above neanderthal intelligence. And the chapter didn't make me bash my head thinking how dumb and boring the MC is. I guess I'll keep it in my library then. Okay, 4th Wall? 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇

If you drop this novel imma throw u at impel down

Extremely good chapter, at last it's not a saint nor a useless otaku

Evil MC

The introduction of his past seemed a bit forced and meh, you know that you could have put that introduction better at the time of his death, since when you die, your whole life passes in front of your eyes like a movie. So his whole life could have passed in that moment and it would have been better

good prologue

"God **** you" Says the guy that didnt do the thing we've been ingrained since birth now to do. Says the guy who wasted money, which probably caused his father to work harder, and step on toes. Says the guy who ****ed up their schooling. Aah yes, it's all gods fault

you know your my give me impression like yami my from holyjoker

prologue wasnt too long at all. super well written. could have read more and liked it.

Does anyone just skip the beginning and go straight for rebirth or just me

Great prologue! You've characterised the motivations, ambitions, and personality of the MC extremely well.

What happens to his mom now...?

its great, but really sad

hmmm not bad, I'm enjoying this

That was really a good prologue, kind of made me empathize the mc

I have an understanding of how bad your character's personality it is, what kind of psychopath asks for a freaking superpower so that he can murder a couple of people? An insecure teenager with violent tendencies is all I got from this 😂