Comments of chapter undefined of Danmachi - Tales of the multi talented Swordsman.

You know guild ‘advisor’ cannot restrict adventurer from entering the dungeon.. not only that, guild ‘advisor’ also cannot tell adventurer what to do or not do.. to be blunt they cannot meddle with adventurer private life.. the most they can do is to give the adventurer an advise on the dungeon and monster inside it.. That’s why they are called guild ‘advisor’ not guild ‘babysitter’.. Even in canon when Eina feel frustrated with Bell going reckless in the dungeon, she cannot restrict him at all.. she can only give him advise and watch him or help him indirectly (like when she ask ais to watch over bell for her).. So reading your Eina here feels like something off~ Sry for the rant.. thanks for the chap~

I understand your character development but honestly it’s starting to get really annoying and its off putting. You had a good thing going between the MC and Hestia but then you decided to throw in all these other girls and its just ruining all your hard work, the MC and hestia are perfect sont ruin it just so you can add more girls plus he shouldve left his dungeon instructor this guy isn’t bell he’s a transmigrator with the experience with 7 great souls that have Godly experience in their given profession plus the innate skills he’s gonna unlock that will boost his experience gain. He’s gonna grow extremely quickly and will spend less time with the dungeon advisor and you’ve already shown that she can’t handle it bor does she want too heck she doesn’t even trust the MC so the relationship is already doomed for failure so why make the MC stick around and roll over like a puppy trying to please it’s master heck why did you let him get pushed around by Lyrs or whatever, the MC clearly knows he didn’t drop that Crystal yet he still took It cause she kept insisting and i hate the fact like your MC Is confident enough to flirt with any women but wont make a move on Hestia when there is clearly chemistry it doesn’t even have to advance that fast you couldnjust have little mentions here and there till you’re confident... sorry for ramballing and complaining just felt stuffy it’s a good story so keep up the good work.

hmm dude don't be too let the bell get carried away with the words of women, even though he said no still in the end he did too. if you want to develop better character 1 by 1 first so it doesn't feel random to me.

why would he still accept the crystal?? and its getting annoying when u bring in all these female characters when u said u wanted to develop the relationships

thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work and great story so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story thanks for your hard work and can't wait to read your next chapters

This story started out great, with the different souls and such, but after you introduced this ‚new‘ MC, you basically stopped writing your own story. At this point, this story is just canon with a different mind in the MC‘s body. And yet, he is still the same old Bell, getting pushed around by girls and forced to act they want, like the naive v*rgin he was. You basically ruined your own character as it is just impossible for a transmigrater with the souls of 7 Great Masters zo act like that, period. I do not know why you force the plot in the direction of the canon, which just doesn‘t fit this story? Maybe after chapter one you just reached the end of your creativity, I‘m out...

Thanks for the Chapter

wew will this be the main theme from now on? easily getting pushed by girl wew it's really hard to find an MC with a backbone when it comes to girls all of them are getting pushed easily

Did you say you only follow the anime? Okay. I tell you once, syr is the goddess Freya, she is an identity that was created to find interesting adventurers and interact with them

He just does anything any woman tells him to, even if he barely knows them. Feels really forced and off putting.

here she come freya or we call her syr flova

Does he know she's freya???

Doesn't Syr work for Freya?

great chapter

Thanks for the chapter 🙂

Thanks for the chapter

This dude is a low key beta. A easily infuence dude if he is infront of girls. Like a 100 yr old Vgin thats horney all his life and reach zen. So he is a lowkey simp even in his mind but not his action.

So why did he take the stones

that stone looks suspicious

Red flags red flags red flags Everywhere