5gojosa
Hmm... about the word language for me isn't a problem, if there is problem someone will tell you to fix or rewrite the said word that doesn't fits to be write. At least the Chapter is readable and has many paragraphs of reading it from the phone. Sometimes the beginner forgot to place the paragraphs space and sign that showing people is talk or thinking and let it be part of monologues. Then again, Sometimes reader forgot that the author mother language isn't always universal language (English) or the author aren't very fluent in using English language to writes. That's why many people playing harsh critiques to the author about the language. Lastly, many author or translator forgot to attach disclaimer or copyright or the original story (if making fanfics, uploading novels or fanfics, and translating novels or fanfics) or the original source in the story summary (not in reviews section comments section) for originality or piracy questions. Sorry for my rants and if you find many mistakes of wording in this comment forgive me.