Comments of chapter undefined of The Tale of the Void Emperor

Sigh... Honestly? This is probably the biggest error you've made. Trying to force Tiana on the audience. She's so unlikable that you can't redeem her. First impressions are very important. Even if she gets a little power, that's not going to change her situation. She's just not interesting to read and her emotions seem fake if we think about what all has happened. She was a pretty face he barely talked to for months and nothing else. The harder you forced her into the plot, the more people grow to dislike her. A new personality for her isn't going to change that. At this point no matter what I review for a grade, I'm knocking off a star just because of her, and I'm considering three stars for the lack of effort in editing. Right now you got great bones, but a butter face and muffin top. If you fix it? This is easily a four-and-a-half-star story that you could easily publish on Amazon.

thanks for the chapter even if she vecomes op she would only stay op for a maximum of like 10-15 chapters just drop that girl she ain't good enough and plz don't pull a she had a rare body cause that would be totally coming out of no where instead make her understand that she can't be with him so she let him go for his future and i don't think athan has shown any feelings towards her other than admiring her beauty so plz just let her stay back with mike and let them neet after he goes to the new world as some girl who found an inheritance to some op female that would be so much better than having her follow him around thanks and sorry for this long ass thing

Kill tiana, FCS, she useless as fukc anyway. even if she has future role in a plot, her character irritate & still be useless trash

Sigh ! I will drop this novel if the author make mc and that girl a couple. It's just like " I Have Countless Legendary Swords " where mc's first wife Jiang Xue is nothing more that thorn and burden in mc's path. Other than saving mc in the beginning, there's no other role for her and the difference between her and mc is just like a ant and the heaven's itself. That's the reason I dropped that novel. And if this novel is also is go in the way, I'll drop it.

Knows the MC for several weeks. Tiana: I'm willing to die for him!!!

Thx, I prefer harem

She doesn't have a special body and she will almost die too...but there will be a reasonable explanation on how she survives...If you want to read about that spoiler then Join the discord as I have written it in the Spoiler channel and feel free to give your thoughts about it. https://discord.gg/Eqnhfb7V

People are so annoying!!

It looks like it's gonna be hard to match her with the mc.

thanks

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Thanks for the chap

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A wonderful

this story has so much potential you should make a discord

Thanks for the chapter