Comments of chapter undefined of The Devil of Yuragi-sou
The Devil of Yuragi-sou
PridefulRoyalty
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I was wondering why there were so many updates in one day, seems like the author wanted to round up the volume. First volume was finely put together, with all the different combinations of animes being implemented well imo I didn't think the MC was 'beta' at all, he's being logical - he knows the consequences and is aware how much of a pain in the ass it will be to deal with them. I'm looking forward to the next volume! It'll be great to see how Emi interacts with her 'family' , and assume MC is gonna screw with her again lol
For real dude, an MC without a harem the size of a small country and doesn't kill an entire lineage because someone looked at him wrong is automatically 'beta' lmao
venomwave:everythig that doesn't conform with how they want the mc to act is classified as being a "beta" or "simp" these days , webnovel reader base are probably one of the worst of all ff websites
As long as it's not a break >_< waiting on Chapter 200 >_> & I'm not worried bout how dramatic or deadly the fighting is or isn't, considering you went with the Daddy route, I figured it wouldn't be *Bloody* if he fights anyways, so I don't get why ppl r complaining >_>? I still enjoy the story so keep it going !
I only complained about the conclusion of this situation because the previous chapter implied that trying to kidnap and separate his daughter from him, as well as trying to kill him was no big deal. That he seemed to accept it just because her intention to do so was good. But even though I thought that, I didn't call the protagonist Beta or something ...
Just ignore those complaints, if you don't make your mc a gary stu xianxia protagonist they would never be satisfied. I on the other hand, really like it, the mc gives a different feeling than your usual mc, probably because he have different goal other than get stronger and get more waifu. It felt like that one fanfic about urahara kisuke in dxd
Tb the story could've started of a bit better. Ex. Build the MC character a little more first, then show how he adapts to his power. Introduce the world-building at the same time. Then start introducing small conflicts along with MC characteristics. This helps build depth to characters. Also answers some questions that might pop up due to MC decisions. By the time I this, the story is already at 130ish. Well these are just my thoughts at suggestion that may be too late.