Comments of chapter undefined of Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]
Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]
Maerry
Chapter comments26
good chapter. - I would have liked the pairing of Naruto with Karin (it would be interesting how you would have made them fall in love, and not to mention that they are Uzumakis, they would have powerful offspring). - The pairing you did is the typical thing you see in all naruto (I only saw two naruto story authors who paired naruto with: ino and the other with karin). -And it's not that I hate Hinata (it just seemed to me that she would make a better match with the protagonist, while with Naruto the potential of her will remain stuck, since the protagonist with her future harem will be stronger).
and here I thought it would be different from other "fanfics", because in everything they put Naruto with Hinata, I thought it would be with sakura or another girl to be something different but it seems that the habit of matching the same thing does not change. xD. - Good chapter, I thought it would be an attack or something more than "Meh". - Resien I come from another fanfic (50) where Naruto also paired with Hinata (it's so predictable). -As there is no longer a protagonist with Hinata (it would be better if you put them aside and focus on the protagonist, it would not be nice if you make you focus on Naruto many times, more on the protagonist).
the decision with the pairing (nothing new to see xD). -I thought it would be Hinata for the protagonist (where while I help her, she wants to follow her example and takes her as a model of being strong, that over time she falls in love, it will be a love that grows with time.). - I wanted to see for once (naruto x sakura), why the (naruto x hinata, is more used). - I didn't like the couple, but I still like the story. - Why is it that in all the naruto stories that I find, it is harem or not harem (the first thing they put with Naruto is Hinata, there are no more characters that can have another development, and also in the original or whatever it's called canon, the relationship was bad, there was no love, they just put him as a love interest with nothing else).
author hopefully change the pairing (since would be for nothing to save her and end with Naruto in the end, everyone thought that it would end with the protagonist, because if in the end you make it end with Naruto, the whole drama is silly, you'd better have it left as the canon where they meet and would have continued with the story, you blew a good potential). - Surely the majority is bothered by the result of the pairing, everyone expected a development, but you leave us with this chapter. - I hope you cheer up and edit it and make naruto mate with another girl (people want the development of hinata's romance with the protagonist, if not, it won't do for you to save her).
