Comments of chapter undefined of Darius Supreme
Darius Supreme
Kotario
Chapter comments26
The source of evil, and malevolence...the author describes... Yet the MC's bottom line is so draconian that he can't even take advantage of a child's lost toys? Even if it would provide with some - even if not very significant - information? What a walking contradiction.
hsif:Yikes, can’t even acurately insult. Hes helping make the book so of course hes going to defend it. what a character can and can’t do is what makes them interesting. His morals are what makes him relatable and human. if you were looking for a book where the main characters actually a sociopath just go away. I can see thats the only type of character you would relate to. While Its good to criticize, insulting people for having a different opinion on an arbitrary matter is stupid.
Story is very well structured and fine tunned but there is a mishap when u see that mc doing this and that you will always start to link him with monkey in zoo. That is no matter if a monkey can solve the rubik cube it will only live in a cell.So if he start to build his plan to resist against fate(goddess) then his actions toward the goal will bring story up a notch.
Author, i thought you said this MC Was smart? First he discovers he can make a flexsble armor, That he can wear under his clothes, but doesnt make ot for himself. then he just wipes the tablet without even going through it! As a former grandpa, he should know kids usually have the latest apps. Things A.dul.ts usually dont even know existed. but he just wipes it. instead of changing the color and deleting the stuff he doesnt need.
