Comments of chapter undefined of The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
NightWind
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Hey Nightwind, I'm just a random reader, but I wanted to give you a piece of advice. You're way too ambitious at the moment. There are 100 floors to climb with stuff to do in between. If you spend 20+ chapters on each floor, eventually you'll start running out of content and out of motivation. So I advise you to just chill a bit. Make some short 5-10 chapter floor arks with 1-2 chapters between them. Be more liberal with the time skips. Disperse your ideas among different arks to let the novel progress more smoothly. I've seen like a dozen of authors who made the same mistake and eventually burned down and went on hiatus. If you keep the same pace, I don't think you'll make it to floor #30.
Thank you for the double chapters it was a very nice Surprise I am a reader who likes detail in my story if that makes it long-winded Ok it is awesome that you ptake your readers opinion into consideration I’ve never been an author myself so I wouldn’t know how it feels but I think you should write a story you want to Write I think you should write the story how you want it to be written and not worry too much about Other people think
