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Comments of chapter undefined of The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361Lv11Time_Zekrom_4361

The chapters are great as always so keep up the good work. However, I want to make a suggestion about mages or skills in general. You(the author) so far portray skills as one of the difficult things to get other than learning from a skill book. So mages or skills in general means for me is the usage of manipulating mana particles or some kind of energy source in order to perform spells or skills. But, so far everything seems to be automatic when using skills. So what I am trying to say is to treat magic like something similar to the alchemist profession where you need to understand your ingredients which are the mana particles for mages and utilize or manipulate the ingredients to get your final result or reaction. In other words, I want the MC to be less reliant on the usage of "skills" which is basically the tower authority I presume, and be more reliant on actual talent and skill when performing without the "tower help" which can be later used to help create new spells or develop a new theory about the laws in the tower since I see mages as people who utilize energy to manipulate, control, or destroy the laws of the tower. However, I can understand you can't apply this now either because he too weak to do that right now, or it's too hard to write which I can understand since it would need a lot of thinking and planning to write it out or you are already planning to do this but it will be in the later chapters. Anyway, sorry if this response may have many incorrect grammar and mistakes but keep up the good work. :D

Apostle_of_cthulhu
Apostle_of_cthulhuLv4Apostle_of_cthulhu

He needs authority i assume to make spells i am just guessing but mage can't make spells the tower controls it all buuut they can make pseudo spells but no one trys or its to hard. Thats what our main character did made a pseudo spell and got authority or whatever he probaly needs to unlock the title tower pioneer to create true spells.

Imafungiy
ImafungiyLv12Imafungiy

How do i always get first....

Z0mb1e
Z0mb1eLv1Z0mb1e

Good Work

C13MO
C13MOLv13C13MO

Amazing chap, cant wait for what happens with him

Dragon_Slayer_6584
Dragon_Slayer_6584Lv2Dragon_Slayer_6584

wait... i just thought, if all stats increase by 5 does that include luck?

Resident
ResidentLv13Resident

thanks for the chapter

FoxTrot
FoxTrotLv4FoxTrot

great chapter as always!

Thunder32_
Thunder32_Lv4Thunder32_

thanks for the chapter author

TagDaReaper
TagDaReaperLv5TagDaReaper

Thanks for the chapter.

MOnkey_D_Luffy
MOnkey_D_LuffyLv4MOnkey_D_Luffy

Thank you for the chapter

MILARCH
MILARCHLv13MILARCH

demon level instructor.

northpoem
northpoemLv13northpoem

thanks for the chapter my dear author

TabooExistence
TabooExistenceLv13TabooExistence

awesome plz more 🙏 good job

irl
irlLv7irl

thanks for the chapter! 😃 --and the team is off to a not-so-harmonious start, but i think that if otto can sober up that trainer, those three kids will be "hello, hell-level training ... can we cancel our reservation?" 😂

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

really not a fan of how MC seems to be panting/sweating like a horse after 1min of a fight. seems to happen all the time.

wlitsch
wlitschLv11wlitsch

thanks for the chapter. I don't understand why those kids would want to voluntarily enslave themselves to the MC, or why the MC would want underpowered slaves that distract him and cost him money and power. it's not rational. The trainer is genuinely powerful. i could understand if it were just him.

DreamedLullaby
DreamedLullabyLv15DreamedLullaby

Thanks for the chapter~đŸ±

Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

👍

IrwingSchrodinger
IrwingSchrodingerLv5IrwingSchrodinger

Thanks for the chapter!