Comments of chapter undefined of Alchemist Chat Group
Alchemist Chat Group
Bymo
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ok not to be a jackass. You are a new to writing and very inexperienced in it , 1. you are making it to forced none one gonna have that type of reaction like trusting and being so greater full that the will start trusting tough away ( only if they are wuxia protagonist the unreasonable type) 2. try to keep the thought normal like making them suspect it then slowly trust or the fear is also good as it's out of there would stuff Don't get mad or anything it for criticise only . [img=recommend]
Bymo:It's a chat group. It needs to have unreasonable elements in it. Not to have serious elements in it. I already made the mistake of making things more "real" in a chapter, more sentimental, and regretted it instantly. I'm not new to writing. You can tell from how I write, my English, my management. I even have an ff I wrote as a try here on wn. Not to mention all the things I wrote for myself only. I don't get mad, I happily accept criticism, and it helps me a lot too. So don't worry. I hope I replied to your comment in full. What you said with your comment is good, but I want to exaggerate it since I am creating a chat group. Otherwise, I wouldn't have written a chat group. A too serious chat group can become boring faster than a comical one, not to mention I'm trying to mixing both elements in it, without it going to collide with each other.
hisashi is probably unlucky , cuz he cant get anything significant in his own world and he cant use armament haki or observation haki i think? because of the strength of his body ? and no magic or esper power either so he doesn't realize he is the unluckies one ,and if we think about it there is another power not sure how author ? will do with chakra cuz there are some stories that makes it out of mana + ki ,and i don't think he(MC) can seperate those or make his own chakra/mana/ki ?
