Comments of chapter undefined of Villains also get second chance

Instead of just 3rd person’s POV why not add a NCP’s POV? For example: It could be the duke’s aid or a maid or just about any official in the duke’s court. Someone who sees it all through eyes that are fresh and unbiased. The author could thus give us a better idea of how she sees the characters of her own creation.

interesting

I think 3rd POV will help us to understand the situation better ... but dear author you call the final shots

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I think author we never know until we try n since it's the initial part of the novel I think you should try the 3rd pov too....also the next chp is about the court room so it will help us to understand that chp better anyway since we will get to know what happen in the chp as a whole n not just one persons pov. so it's a yes.

SCREAMING

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Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Keep it up! I am in love! Stay healthy author, we wouldn't you to over work yourself!

like how their rel5is going. finally.. author, whatever you decide. your the writer. if you're unsure, do a trial and error to see how you feel about the location of POV.

Thanks for the chapter! Love It! I like the way it is. However, it might be interesting to have a 3rd POV. In the end, i trust your judgement since the story is great!

interesting and intruiding , this story is amazing!

nice nice nice....

3 POV is OK.

Thanks for the chapter

I think 3rd povs is not necessary.

I'm expecting a good showdown between the white lotus and the red villain 😁

At least they are progressing with their relationship

... his age changed again?! So he was 14, then 12, then 16... now 11???