Comments of chapter undefined of A Ghoul In Dc[Completed]

Thx for the chapter. Also I completely support Jasper, they didn't search for that well. Batman's the world's greatest dective my ass, Jasper was literally tortured for two years I think Raven was a bit unreasonable.

As a person with a weak heart (literally and figuratively), I cannot read this in one go, drama is not my cup of tea but I understand that it is good for the story and it shows the reality of the lives of all beings

Author, just put the stick on the table and measure which one is bigger, Raven deserves to **** himself, Jasper literally took her off the street and gave her a life and she just ignores him for all the torture he went through

Ay this was a good chapter , and i liked it. Way better than the other one, feels more like an actual story. It breaks my heart seeing Raven cry, but this will only help her feelings get strong for him.

This chapter felt real, not like the previous one.

You want a bullet through your brain, don't you author?

I really want him to beat batman half dead and spit on his or use his secret torture method to batman(1000-7 thingy) while in front of **** titans let them see ugly face of famous batman. And author You really know how to bring hate out of me but this is good thing.(at least you can make your reader to emotional about your story)

So sad but I dio sama is not Sad

Noooo dont do raven like that!! :(

I enjoyed the chapter and actually felt it made more sense than his 'dreams. However, wouldn't it make more sense for him to be more angry about her abandoning him rather than her moving on? I mean, if its confirmed ur dead then its understandable, but she and the others didn't even bother searching for him. She abandoned him, not even looking for a body.

much better chapter than the 2 previous I just hope there's no NTR plz.

Now, this is what I call a perfect reunion after that sort of stuff. Literally, EVERY single novel I have read can't do this. Most either don't have the heart to do it or just won't because the readers would be sulty, but honestly, this is the BEST way you can do this in my opinion. It gives the readers more chapters, drama and suspense to read the next chapter. I originally thought this was going to be another weak-hearted fanfic but it just came right out the left field and left me stunned. This is hands down probably my favorite fanfic because it has everything it needs in it.

incredible chapter, luckily it was just a dream so it got much better. This is really very exciting.

Что это за х*йня ? Как главный герой который переродился стал таким сопливым долб*ебом ? Я вообще не понимаю зачем автор не давал гг становится сильнее и отдал на воспитание Селене с Бетменом. Я долго сдерживался, думал что ГГ станет на истинный путь гуля но нет. Это дроп

Honesty, after this chapter I'm just not hooting for Raven anymore. After everything he have done for her she didn't even searched for his body and simply moved on. if he just simply forgive her and get back with her then this history will be ruined for me.

Thanks for the chapter by the way, keep up the good work 👍

Did your mother drop you when you were young? Is that why you give the MC no love? And yes I’m joking.... partially.... 😤

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for another enjoyable chapter, and honestly, anyone who expects Jasper to be a reasonable individual after two years of horrendous torture is very very delusional

You know this story, it's actually a roulette, like losing your memories and being Batman's bitch, but I really liked this chapter, it's real, because a person is supposed to act here, always in anime and all this shit forgive any shit they do to you and they don't even complain, this cap makes it seem like the MC is a person with feelings, who can make him angry and become irrational, that and stop being Batman's bitch