Alferian
I just hate the fact that the mc is a naive child who was just borned into the world. I mean, if you have cancer in your body, souldn’t you want to destroy it?? Even if it’s part of your body?! Saying that he doesn’t want to kill because he created them and is part of his body is the most stupid excuse.
very forced, rather it should be the opposite, where those who threatened him had to give them compensation not to kill them. -And if you want to get him into the plot, you just have to give him a free pass to do what he wants without being disturbed, I don't see why you are going to make them help him and on top of that, with this protagonist, a child is something that many don't they like.