Comments of chapter undefined of The Epic of Leviathan

Man, I don't know what to say, you keep on butchering your fanfic with what you did with Nemuri and now Rumi they are completely OOC, I know that this a parody fanfic but man wtf? the backstory you give them don't even make sense? it doesn't even have a purpose or anything and it was the last straw personally, her character in the original is really complex and we have to pay attention to the underlying meaning behind it to understand her in depth and since she's one my favorite character well let's say I delved into it a lot and it's really interesting and you get to learn a lot from it, like the fact that she didn't have any relationship anyway it doesn't make sense and that's where I'll stop and drop

So in your parody fanfic is your character virgin?

How will he start in the new world? Will he be a baby? Hopefully he retains his power level and not the classic my body is to weak for my power stuff.

If u stick to three girl's per world Mr write can pick his choice and leave the other two choices to the reader's this way Mr writer can still have his personal favourites as well like Daphne greengrass this way both Mr writer and reader are happy 😁😁😁😂😁

Thanks for the chapter

Tftc

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks

happy oops with E.M.P. in terrorists city. nice one.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Another great chapter, thanks for all the work you put into the story

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Thx

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapters!

Big chapter.