Comments of chapter undefined of With Naruto Knowledge System in Harry Potter World
With Naruto Knowledge System in Harry Potter World
The_Lost_God
Chapter comments11
very wacky and all over chapter you already made him very broken by given him all this then dropping him Harry potter world as the world is very weak and low tier the gamer mind and body is so much broken in low tier world's like this one you should retcon some of them or arleast make them come later in the story of you decide to make him travel around right now the MC is very very much broken
Not a fan of any kind of bashing stories... and this looks like an Dumbledore and Weasley bashing already... any kind of bashing for the sake of bashing usually is a sign of bad-quality fics... I'm going to read a couple of chapters but it doesn't look promising.
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