TheGodSage
in your last sentence, it says "his laughter voices out..." I think you meant "his laughter echoing out..." thanks for the chapter! it's an interesting story so far. I also like how you started the story so far back in time. most people just jump right into the modern marvel story (I'm including Captain Americas birth in the modern time setting) when there's so much potential further back in history. keep up the good work!