LazySageDao
You infodumped the higher realms WAY too early. It's something you're supposedly keep a secret and only gradually reveal after you've stomped the lower realms. Showing us the highest bosses wanting to kill the MC and even Heavenly Will acting right away is a huge mistake for the pace and scale of the story. I don't want to worry about these existences who can wipe out galaxies with a breath, or a Heavenly Will looking to find and wipe out the MC. Everything that happens in the lower world will now feel pointless and just preparation for the end. When your MC is level 1, you don't want to show level 10000000 scenes, because they're too distant, and will colour the level 1-1000 journey and influence it in a bad way.