Comments of chapter undefined of Severus Snape-Prince

Damb! I like the new version of her But I guess I can Hope for the Best.

Dude wtf? You can't just write her "mind is in chaos" then in the next paragraph he asks's "what's wrong"! You at least have to write something like she collapsed or whatever in between. How else are we supposed to know what happened!

thx 4 chap

Ooooh 🤨👍

Muito obrigado,ficou melhor