Comments of chapter undefined of The Ancients World

I feel like like the abrupt change of point of view needs a line when you change the POV, because it threw me off when it wasn't from Zern's perspective.

*Sigh* @Author, I think, you are overdoing with the number of times stats being shown in game in the chapters so far.

i personally think the change is fine im just happy i get to read a good story. Your writing is much better then mine.

Please stop spamming his stats almost every chapter, now we know how OP this MC is.

This absurd writing style is starting to get to me. There's zero indicators in writing to indicate pov changes. Only way is by picking up context in to writing, but sometimes that is hard unless character's situation is very different. You might even go paragraph or two without knowing who is speaking.

Why Does Author Keep Changing POV On A Whim...?

I think you need to stop with the stat showing it feels like there is a stat showing at every chapter it becomes more of a filler (it's also a bit boring that I had to skip it). Also, the change of POV needs a warning it's a bit confusing at times. Grammar needs editing as well.. I AM LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE 😘

stop with the stats nobody reas those

Thanks for the chapter!!

Thanks for the extra chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

I am really enjoying this story so far..thanks for efforts🙏🏿

Thanks for the chapter~🐱

why is English writing so bad 👎

Yeah, it took me a moment as well to realize it wasn't Zern. Mostly because I'm also used to some characters speaking in the 3rd person view of themself. Not that Zern has done so before to make that assumption.