Comments of chapter undefined of The Ancients World

From third person perspective at the start of the paragraph at the end of the chapter to first person perspective, without transition. Changing perspectives with no warning to the reader is not good writing, this is confusing to the reader. I realize this comment is most likely going to be deleted, but if you're serious about becoming a published professional author, you will be expected to take criticism when it is due, it will be your editors job to make sure you make changes to your writing when necessary for the understanding of your readers. Author started the paragraph with, "The first recognizable person was Wilted Rose. I..." Who is I? Who recognized Wilted Rose, the omniscient author? I had to re-read this entire end of the chapter to realize who was speaking by elimination of number of people who are supposed to be in the room (3 guilds) Munchies, Dark Blade are mentioned, before realizing it must be Wilted Rose who is speaking.

yo instead of taking up so much space by putting the stats twice, just say he's adding all his points and update it next time we see it

i kinda skip through that last bit about the "I" pov since it confused the h*ll out me. 🤨😰😫

Yo, dear author,, how about you split the interface for skill and perk for passive and active.. There skill with level 1/10 but there was a skill that have non level.. So i think you can just split it so when the skill added like 30 skill or more,, your not misspell or reader can make easy to read them.. Just opinion.. I enjoy your story.. Keep it up

Stupid MC disgusted that beggars don’t get money. It’s a dam game, what do you expect.

Thanks for the chapter~🐱

thanks

Hye author i think that at maybe the end of the next chapter you should put a poll askind whether or not people would like more chapters or longer chapters but there are less. also thanks for the chapter

skipping to the comments rn but I just realized why he was discusted when he got the title he was the only one who helped those kids I mean even if it's a game you should still help them

So what does the new title even do?

Thanks