Comments of chapter undefined of Twilight : Dawn

Man I am just telling you just make sure you take your fanfic in a different direction from mine since I did find some parts you fully copied from my fanfic

Nice

I thank you for the chapter.

thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work

Keep going please 🤩👌

just creepy

thanks for the chapter

Keep going please 🤩👌

update??

does this update daily?

moreeee

MAWR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yay thx 4 awesome chap!

👍

Great add a few more chapters, so n that we can give u a proper review and some power stones lol

Nice chapter i like how you tied into the canon scene of edward and bella. great job keep it going 👍

Thanks for the chapter~~😄👍

When I saw the movie it made me laugh a lot and when I read it in the Fanfics it still makes me laugh ... a murderous beast .. the world's biggest predator .. pffff Some shiny fairies suck blood ... hahaha ... ok no .. thanks for the chapter .. good story👍👍👍