priyabolagani
Hey author, the story is good till now but I think there are still some mistakes grammatically. For eg: when you said bet but were intending it to be beat. I mean bet is not a form of the word beat. In fact, I was quite confused when you also mentioned the word bet in the previous chapter but now I got it clear. Sorry, if I wrote too much but you know I'm a sucker for English language and I babble a lot ๐