xAlexiax
This is such a good story, but I am struggling with her going back and forth between talking in 3rd person to talking in 1st person. "Paige looked back to see Jaxson still standing and watching me leave". I have to force myself to read it with "her" where you put "me". I've seen both in the same sentence "me her". Again, I really do love the story. I just can't help but hope this gets sorted out...