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Comments of chapter undefined of Make Voldemort Handsome Again

Elyon
ElyonLv4Elyon

Interesting start.

Peridote
PeridoteLv4Peridote

Ahahahaha This is an exciting beginning. Brilliant!

WWFire
WWFireLv4WWFire

Dont forget to remove those extra question/exclamation marks (ノ´・ω・)ノ ミ ┻━┻

BerriApplepi
BerriApplepiLv5BerriApplepi

Just from the first chapter, I know that this is going to be a funny ride! Can't wait to read more! 💖😆

NatsuHika
NatsuHikaLv4NatsuHika

nice. promising. 👍

Crowley_Black
Crowley_BlackLv6Crowley_Black

the beginning of this story is interesting, although I will sounds like complete idiot on most comments but the grammar usage and the flow of the story are good enough. as for description the MC description at the start doesn't felt like it was that important to be mentioned but eh, another thing I'm confused of is the location. is it a room or a forest or what? if it's a room then how come she can see the sky?(although blocked by a chopping board)

Ephemerall
EphemerallLv1Ephemerall

Wonderful premise! The tone of the work is jovial and entertaining!! The descriptions are well thought out however I felt the descriptions of the MC’s appearance to be kinda distracting and disrupting the flow in the begging but the latter parts were quite enjoyable. Looking forward to the rest of the chapters [img=recommend]

dreamygurl7968
dreamygurl7968Lv4dreamygurl7968

Wow author, it's interesting begin. whenever I think of voldemort I always imagine a duck face without a beak with a human body. but reading your first chap I am so eager to know what will happen to next. hope voldemort gets a human face 😂😂

RachelRuth
RachelRuthLv4RachelRuth

Whether one is familiar with 'System' genre/niche really helps you understand what you're getting yourself into 🤣 I feel worried for the MC What I liked about this chapter: 1. The System's Board (Message Screen, Information Box etc.) is pink instead of the usual shade of blue 2. We're in Dec 1, 2020 people woo! 3. Girl knows what she wants I'm an easy to please reader, I came here to see how the relationship develops between Voldemort, and though we haven't even seen the dude, I'm shipping them in the back of my head. It's been a long time since I read fanfiction, falling a bit to the belief that originals are better but this is certainly something that tugs your heartstrings :3 or rather the concept is really good and fanfiction allows you to be hella creative and think of this entertaining and amazing scenarios 💕

Xincerely
XincerelyLv5Xincerely

A hilarious beginning, I love it so far!

iamno
iamnoLv5iamno

I am shock when the board turned red, as if it's a living being

LuciferMorningStar
LuciferMorningStarLv4LuciferMorningStar

In the synopsis, by popular , do you mean famous or liked?

jikanyotomare
jikanyotomareLv5jikanyotomare

interesting... will cecily turn into hocrux if she refused?

Hasrahnian_Hasnan
Hasrahnian_HasnanLv4Hasrahnian_Hasnan

For The Beginning, This is very funny. I cant wait what happen to cecyl when she going back to her Era.[img=update]

CailinMatthews
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I wonder if the board needs something from Cecily? What does it gain if Voldy becomes popular?

CailinMatthews
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I haven't read it yet but I clicked and I—Will I regret? Stay tuned!

joyenjoy14
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Woww what a brilliant story! Keep up the good work👏