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Comments of chapter undefined of I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)

Catrosious
CatrosiousLv4Catrosious

xp

Shenming
ShenmingLv13Shenming

Tom's red eyes is a side effect of using too much dark magic. You making his eyes red just because it looks cool is stupid.

OkayRose
OkayRoseLv3OkayRose

Theres no Harem? Finally a reasonable author

KaiDranzer
KaiDranzerLv5KaiDranzer

Two problems, one the obvious - the eyes the other being the evil soul. Even if you haven't read the book, you should have saw the movie. I am not going to talk about the eyes since everything is obvious. Little Tom did cause problems but still he was normal, talented and bad but normal wizard. His enviornment made him react that way. He was bad not evil (before hogwarts).

Airelda
AireldaLv4Airelda

The red eyes were a bad idea. 1. He isn't an albino so him having that eye color is weird for muggles. 2. He has powers and does bad things with them. 3. Christians in Britain were extremely devout and superstitious. 4. He 100% matches the description of the Anti Christ. He should not have been able to survive this long without being identified as a demon by the muggle community he lived in.

Extant
ExtantLv13Extant

You need to research the novel series of Harry Potter more. If you have done it at all. Tom was bullied just as badly as Harry was when they were children. You are making Tom Evil when he was a child based on him when he was an ***** after he split his soul too many times and had delved into dark rituals that warped his mind from the side effects of such rituals.

Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv4Ashmodai

Voldemort only got red eyes after rituals after hogwarts which gave him his baldy snake look. As child he had green eyes...

DragonsRulez
DragonsRulezLv4DragonsRulez

are bright souls idiotic heroes that dies for strangers and the dark souls idiotic villains that destroy the sun becouse its too bright?

EugenSimion
EugenSimionLv14EugenSimion

Just a few lines in the chapter and I managed to find plot hole number 1: Does he have red eyes or green eyes?

Basanti_Nayak
Basanti_NayakLv3Basanti_Nayak

haha

CassTheEevee
CassTheEeveeLv14CassTheEevee

interesting take on the pure and tainted souls friend

AzureConqueror
AzureConquerorLv5AzureConqueror

I'm surprised so many people think Tom was evil from a young age

Kpnovellover
KpnovelloverLv5Kpnovellover

so mc is not taking over tom's body but fusing with his soul.. ... does this mean that the mc's gonna have a dark side

BrianGallacher7
BrianGallacher7Lv14BrianGallacher7

what year is it set since it's a cross over have him train with the ancient one have him train with wolverine in tracking and fighting techniques etc

BeguilingIncubus
BeguilingIncubusLv3BeguilingIncubus

I'm curious, usually fanfics follow the main story flow no matter what even if there's some changes. But if the mc is the reason the main story started(voldemort), then how will this fanfic proceed??

Basanti_Nayak
Basanti_NayakLv3Basanti_Nayak

haha

Ezukejyll
EzukejyllLv6Ezukejyll

Interesting

Xanderix
XanderixLv13Xanderix

I finally found it! I had to look through your activity till I found a reply of yours to a comment on the story.

MohamedRost
MohamedRostLv6MohamedRost

Thanks for thy chapter!

TurtleManiacc
TurtleManiaccLv10TurtleManiacc

Thanks for thy chapter!

Mindya_Biz
Mindya_BizLv14Mindya_Biz

hey Warlord is this story completed?