Comments of chapter undefined of In Bleach with a System!

Please read. I won’t lie to you; I didn’t like how the chapter turned out at all. The first part was quite nice, I think but after that… I don’t know. I’ll wait and see what you guys think about it. Just don’t be too mean please lol I’m feeling kind of down since my granpa is ill af and I can’t even go and see him with this corona stuff so… Dunno. I hope you enjoyed the chapter at least, and I certainly hope u didn’t feel like it was trash. We are past the half a million views too, which I think is amazing. I can’t even begin to tell you guys how much I appreciate that ur taking the time to read my work. I’ll be reading your comments like always, so… I hope ur having a nice day! Maybe if all of you don’t like this chapter I’ll rewrite it or something, I don’t want to ruin the story due to writing in a sore mood. The groups go like this: Chad-Ishida-Orihime. Yoruichi-Kuromiya. Ichigo-Ganju. Some of u asked about the harem right now so… It’s looking like this, though again it’s not finale: Yoruichi, Rukia, Halibel, Bambietta, Rangiku (I guess, we will have to see how the interactions go between her and Kuromiya in the next chapter).

thanks for the chapter ah no Orihime and Nell in the harem so disappointing(can't you add just those two making it seven? don't see how that is harder then 5)

I won't lie to you, I really don't like Rangiku for the harem, I mean, it may fit the flirtatious personality it has, but I honestly don't see it as harem material. In my opinion a good harem would be: Yoruichi, Soi Fong, Halibel, Bambietta. I think that 4 women is enough, to put more women in the harem is filling and would look bad, even 4 doesn't look so attractive, I would say that 3 is better, but it doesn't matter much. Good chapter. Pd: Do it Hollow (¿

add orihime

i know this dude is in the known what happens in cannon so why is he killing them left and right ? when he could easily just slap them night night ? .. seems little counterproductive if they want to be on the same side later on.... Awesome chapter otherwise :D keep em coming

Thanks for the chapter and i think its ok to not add Orihime in the harem but you should really consider adding Nel in the harem

Keep any of the girls you want in the harem and exclude the ones you don't if you force yourself to write stuff you don't like it will hurt your motivation. People will complain no matter what just know the majority enjoy your story otherwise they wouldn't keep reading it. That being said definitely add Nel to the harem lol

Neil, Hallibel, Yoruichi, Soi Fon, Unohana, Lisa, Bambietta, and Nemu are best girl's in my eye's. Especially the first 5 i mentioned, other's are good too, but these are my fav's. Well i think Rukia, Rangiku, and Inoue are good too. But 2 already love someone, and the other one, (Rukia) make's a good couple with Ichigo or Renji. Well Ichigo doesn't work for obvious reason's, so it's the mc or Renji. So Rukia is a decent pick too, well it's all my opinion.

thanks for the chapter 🙂☺️🙂 waiting for the next chapter

I dont like he has to kill to leave the first page.... he killed the shinigami just like that, its not like they are at war

when he started killing people it turn kinda lame

Thanks for the chapter

The chapter was not specifically bad, but the fact that Mc killed those weaker than he bothered me a little. Bleach was never about killing opponents, of course he is not about making friends with them, but the deaths, however common they were, was never a highlight of the work. Of course there were deaths against hollows, some pretty cruel, but I think it's a little unnecessary to do that with secondary characters, since it just shows how Mc doesn't care about that.

thanks for the chapter and keep up the great work

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!

thanks for the great chapter. I was having fun reading it

thanks for the chapter. I'd go for Soi Fon instead of Rangiku, mostly because she would mesh much better with MC and the rest then rangiku ever would.

The killing felt like a bit to much. I get that he cannot control his powers well yet but if he can ‘vanish’ in front of Gin then he can definitely avoid a few no names and not escalate the conflict between them. And its not like he cannot change the rules of his book. Like being trapped for 13 days until its over(book is Op). He is associating with the ‘good guys’ who are willing to get their hands dirty but still adhere to a more stringent moral code. i.e Orohime healing the gate gaurd instead of butchering him. Their group specifically made friends with several captians due to their strength and good moral character. Which is why they left alive. I dont believe the good guys group would do nothing while he acts like a villain.