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Comments of chapter undefined of Gamer in Game of Thrones

NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv13NewGoldie

that just to force men, the MC making other person make the big decisions for him. If the MC wants to be a prominent figure its should be in his own terms not just blindly followings others telling him what to do, that just Bland and boring.

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ValkoWolf
ValkoWolfLv14ValkoWolf

mc can be op but it requires work so it's good for your story building ... I think you are currently headed in a warlord of essos direction with your mc and I look forward to reading more

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antagonist207
antagonist207Lv3antagonist207

good stuff...just remember to give the mc solid backbone in all scenarios so that he doesn't end up becoming a beta....

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Young_Dexter_1905
Young_Dexter_1905Lv13Young_Dexter_1905

thank god he took the essos route, i cant stand all the got fanfics on here that have them bending the knee for the starks or helping them, i'm excited to read the adventures in essos!

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shayan_mohebbi
shayan_mohebbiLv4shayan_mohebbi

its good altough dont make our mc impotent 😂

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Great_Abby
Great_AbbyLv3Great_Abby

Amazing fanfic, and the chapter was great!

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Lucas_Stark
Lucas_StarkLv14Lucas_Stark

I like the story so far you have made him powerful but not op yet. We will have to see how powerful you make other magic users compared to the MC. I would say that the House of Undying would target him to find out how he can do magic. He could make friends with the the Faceless men due to having technically passing through Death's realm. Also R'hllor's followers could go either way due to they could see him as the Prince that was promised or an agent of the Great other by bring brought back to life

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BigBoobs
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sage_of_balance
sage_of_balanceLv2sage_of_balance

great story but longer chapters would make it greater

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HadesChampion
HadesChampionLv4HadesChampion

I like it , nice to have a op mc in got, hope you add a good romance and not heaps of mind raped women or whores. I hope you keep this story going and you can have all my stones every day, love this . well done

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Vali_3582
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Juwon_Oh
Juwon_OhLv4Juwon_Oh

Great

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ClayRayne
ClayRayneLv6ClayRayne

Thanks for the chapter. Don't drop.

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moon
moonLv13moon

Exp sect

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pan39
pan39Lv5pan39

Thanks for chapter please contiue writing

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pain19441944
pain19441944Lv5pain19441944

I like it your building it up great can't wait for more

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rabbit_kun
rabbit_kunLv4rabbit_kun

Sucks the he will be in his late forties to early 50s by the time cannon starts makes me wonder what you have planned and if he will have a family by then unless he has high vitality meaning longer lifespan and still being young looking healthy and strong

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McLoggernaut
McLoggernautLv11McLoggernaut

Awesomeness

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Adolstein
AdolsteinLv12Adolstein

Story is pretty good as long as you don’t make him too much overpowered i think the story will have a great future... just maybe longer chapter (but that’s just because i love your story)😂

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sacredyeti
sacredyetiLv15sacredyeti

moorrreee