Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter, Monkey King Campione(Being reworked)

Amazing chapter! Mystery about the 3 deathly hollows, a new divinity, and dumbledore at the end, things are getting into motion.

can you put a status page for harry at the start to keep a description of all Harry's authorities and gods he's killed in one place

He needs to start acting like a proper campione thats my only complaint so for.

He really needs to stop hiding. He’s literally one of the 7 strongest beigns in existnce.

he needs to campione up , not saying his behavior is wrong until now,he is getting used to It, but except for godou that suffer from Japanese passive sickness,all other campiones are naturally overbearing in their own ways,a campione is a demon king ,either make way or get trampled

Google translate - Personal opinion: why make Harry know that at Hogwarts? when you have made a crossover of HP, DxD and Persy Jackson (if I remember correctly) when there are four more renowned schools in the world and other magical groups and factions out there and staying in the school will only be "used" by Dumbledore as a martyr as happened in the novel / movie you could even make Harry enter into a contract apart from the one he has with Rias which gives him knowledge about other magical systems out there (not for nothing is the heir to one of the satans) if with all that demons live, your library must have things that could be useful to you

Power to limit travel... does this mean he could null/ stop Portkeys, Apparition, Phoenix Travel etc? Have you looked into any Celtic Deities? You might find some of those interesting to use as Heretic Gods.

I like how you're developing his personality now that he's a campione

Great chapter hope u upload more soon

Will he still focus on his magic? In that fight he didnt seem to use it at all Hes a god Shouldnt his innate magic be significantly stronger now?

Liked the fight. He used his head. Not the worst I have seen.

sir can i have some more please?

I thought the fight was really cool, thank you very much for another enjoyable chapter, really hope you don’t drop the story

just realized that he doesn't say a chant to activate his authorities which was one of the things I liked about campione

I thought the fight was good also a cant wait to see what gods he kills

i thought it name is Hippolytus

thanks for the chapter 👍

gracias por el capitulo, me gusto la batalla y la nueva autoridad que gano, espero los próximos capítulos.

Gah soo slow i need more chapters i liking this So much