Bio-Mechanical Monster

THIS IS GOOD! But I wish author san pair the MC With Natasha Romanoff!! PLEASE AUTHOR SAN PAIR HIM WITH BLACK WIDOW!!!!! . . . . . . . . . .

So far so good, writing wise is pretty good, updating stability is also good but It only has 5 chapters so we have to see if this change. Story Development is pretty good, author knows what hes doing. Character Design was a bit off at the start but improved like the next chapters. World Background is pretty good but could be better. I would totally recommend readings this, like there were times i wanted to punch my phone! Anyways cant wait for more!

Well for 5 chapters the story has a great foundation and we could see it's going to be a big one the author also makes sure to fix small problems which occur (not that much at all) I'm really excited to read this story and recommend it has a great idea and a big potential

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This story is sorted out very well andvthe way how he writes it very well i know how hard it is to continue a book and i respect this author. I wish you the best and i love this fic

first review haven't read but I like his other books so this should be no different. . . . .

Love this so so so much looking forward to the reboot question when will you do a reboot of this book im really looking forward to it

please make him continue to be the son of the magnet, this is very good, magnet is my favorite character, very good work I didn’t understand why restarting another one but ok, magnetic powers are very strong and cool I hope that doesn’t change that

Read it!!

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