Odyosis
here the author, only 3 stars, because being honest, I have spelling mistakes, it is a fanfic that I only do for fun, not everyone will like it, those who do not like me, I hope they can find one of their liking, and those who read on, I hope you continue to like it. Sometimes I don't explain very well, time jumps may not be well explained, but I think I improve each chapter. And thanks to all who gave constructive criticism, help to improve as an author. some people may be confused with the dialogues, I will also try to fix that.
I will give it a chance since i like diablo and lol. But this has grammar issues. But one thing thst its extremely bad for a novel. Is the complete lack of a proper synopsis or summary. Instead we are presened with. "I dont know english" and literslly nothing more. Aside that this has diablo and lol elements. We have absolutely no idea what is this about. And as a reader. I feel insulted. Who would wsnt to even read this? Much less offer support.
As I read this to chapter 9 I can make a conclusion that this one is actually good story-wise, what make this bad is the grammar and spelling mistakes. The story is about a young man that got reincarnated to a parallel world of Earth without superpowers. He got Diablo 2 system that can transport him to Diablo 2 world and LoL system that able to summon items and characters from LoL. Additionally, he can go to another world other than Diablo 2.
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Writing Quality :1/5 ( Horrible, the biggest problem here) Stability of Updates 3/5 Ok but not good Story Development : 2/5 Meh Character Design : 1/5 World Background 1/5 --------- The first problem is the writting... this grammar sucks so much.. I understand if someone doesn't speak english well but at least have a basic level.... The story is poor in detail and the grammar makes it even worse to understand the little mentions he makes about everything. This story is just a big meh , not recomended if you are looking for quality or story development.
You can tell, I thought the story wouldn't be understood, for every chapter it was getting better. What I liked the most was the character development and what each one thought. At first I didn't like the MC's personality but in the end I accepted it. It's not the best grammar but it's understood for me.
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