Comments of chapter undefined of The Sin

hi author, first of all, i want to say good job 👍. I read this in a one day and i like it❤. I am an atheist so your religious narrative of god=ultimate good, satan =ultimate evil is kinda alien to me, buuut to be honest I see you are religious and i respect your point of view and I dont mind it that much 🙃. I think you did excelently on describing emotions, it just...wow its the strongest part of your work i think 🤩🤩. on negative side i am not big fan of your constant repetition of words "widen eyes, ragged breath, etc", btw in char description you in 75% describe only eyes 😆. maybe focus on surroundings, add bit more characters. Storyvise some decisions feels like deus ex machina, fe when Dan went to "surrender himself". I could not understand that decision and it felt just like "so story can happen"🤔, same with the constant memory wiping. I like how you use dreams but, because of that story is strongly predictable. I really loved the mysticism of the 4 Sentinels, not everything was explained and it creates great suspense 😮. Lastly, Rebecca and Phil felt bit twodimensional, in character depth and development, with unyelding devotion to Dan just again because of Deus ex machine. Buuut please dont be discuraged by my harsh words😅, in The end I enjoyed your story very much and because of that I winter to express my thougths a bit.😊 I hope you will continue with this novel❤❤. Cheers and best of luck, greetings from Czech Republic 🍺

Peace is trying to expose the whole truth to Daniel Peace is actually the son of God- Jesus Christ.