Comments of chapter undefined of the dark system

I know there are grammar issues! I just read it too. it's isn't nerves I promise u. as I wrote I went back add somethingsomethings and changed a 😂lot 😂 bear with me until chapter 10

Thanks for the chap

It's an interesting story but it's not for me. The quest “Frame the viscount son for being a fucking simp.” makes little sense to me. From his perspective his fiancee was raped and his merely punishing the criminal. In my book that doesn't make him a Simp, but that's my opinion. Good luck with the novel. Thanks for the chapter 😄 Keep up the good work 👍

And those are the disposable ones? Scary! 😈