The Void Monarch

Im writing this review because i’m tired of having to address people individually about this. I am Monad from RoyalRoad and yes I wrote the book void wolf. I wasn’t satisfied with the way I finished the story so I looked at all the feedback I got and started writing this version of it which is conpletely different. I wanted to see if people could tell some sinilarities between the books and appreciate the changes i’ve made so far based on the feedback i’ve gotten. Feel free to go check the original out on RoyalRoad. I hope that clears up all the confusion! Thanks for supporrting me.

Shameless 5-star author review here. I feel that you guys will really enjoy this novel. Feel free to give me a review and let me know what you think. Could always use constructive feedback. Thanks!

The story is fine. the writing is nIce and the grammer is good. But the characters aRe horrendous. First of all this novel is filled with clishes The mc is literally the stereotypical “broken” op mc who kills everyone. morels are none existant, some of the main characters and many of them would be clasified as the big Bads as they are literally arrogent, manipulative, bloodthirstly warmongering family But are somehow mc’s friends for no reason in particular. Mc is dumb and makes snarky comments, And never takes anything siriously again that sterotypical op broken mc. he fights and gets hit for no reason when he could have easily dodged. Its a edGy Book for edgy teens who think being cynical And edgy is cool. Stupid mc, Supid characters. And the good ones get killed off by author for next to no reasons.

I need this novel to drop 1000+ chapters like yesterday. very well written and all the characters are very interesting. Keep uo with this masterpiece

I dont usually write reviews but you sir have my respect. Your story is so enjoyable and flows smoothly. The chapters are long and immersive. I love the characters bro keep it up. Please please please dont drop im sure this will be extremely popular if u drop chapters faster tho that will be very hard with the length of those chapters.

Hey! Just want to know will it be the same as void wolf on royalroad? I read it 1-2 years ago, but it looks very similar....................................

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decent story. No major changes from void wold. Better question though? What happened to your royalroad and patreon. You havent updated the wolfs progeny in 17 months on royal road. And patron has been silent for a year! whats going on?

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Hmm do I need to read that novel called void wolf to get a better understanding? or do I not need to understand the story? are they both located in the same universe or world? dimension?

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The story is amazing, I'm only 6 chapters in and I'm already in love. The chapters are long and the dialogue is enjoyable. Keep up the good work

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All I have to say is upto ch 23 this novel is a masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Easily my favorite novel on the site, the changes from the Royal Road version are a welcome change from my favorite author on that site. Long chapters, well-thought-out characters, world-building, and abilities, a diamond on this site.

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