Reviews of Naruto: The Avengers

I liked it so I went ahead and read all the remaining chapter at fanfiction.net so here's my honest review: There's really not much to be criticize. Few misspelling here and there and a little bit of grammar fix and it will be great. Story wise the author has a plan, plot and a clear direction on where he wanna take the story which a good thing to have so that an author won't get loss and write himself into a pickle. Sure it's still a ripoff without that much originality but it's a fanfic what can you do about it. It's already good fanfic wise. Characters The protagonist is Gary Stu through and through but again, it's a fanfic. Almost every fanfic has Gary or Mary stu protagonist. But let get to meat and potatoes. Dialogue. The author was able to create great dialogue between characters and insinuate there character. The author was able to make dialogue that seems natural and capture the characters characteristics which is rare for a fanfic. Mainly because it's quite hard and could easily turn cringey fast but the author could hold it and did a good job on it. I wish more authors create dialogue in there books more. Sure there are sometimes some dialogue miss but still it's pretty great. On a completely unrelated note I just wanna address this. I've seen many people do this especially in the internet. What the protagonist have is not a harem, it's an open relationship which is completely different from harem. Harem is group of female sharing a single mate or vice versa. Women can have harem too. The protagonist has a relationship with both women and by the looks of it the women are also in a relationship with each other. That's an open relationship not a harem. Also cheating is still cheating as s*x is still s*x even if its a girl and girl or boy and boy. Doesn't matter what your partner gender is it's still ***. Lots of people fetishize this thing but its still not right. It's mainly because of **** that people gloss over this but if your significant other had s*x with someone even if it's the same gender as them its still cheating, cuckolding or what ever you wanna call it. No matter how hot it seem. Anyway it's still a good read.

https://***.fanfiction.net/s/13631132/1/Naruto-The-Avengers You have the same name as the account you posted on the fanfiction. Are you the original author? https://***.fanfiction.net/s/13631132/1/Naruto-The-Avengers

GUYS, I've read the story on fanfiction, ages ago. I highly recommend tho I give it a read. I'll only say this, BLACK WIDOW MAIN WAIFU. Tiger, out.

It's Amazing. We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) (Ooh) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry

wrong tags this should be r15 also canon rehash tags is also missing, I read this on ff since its longer there and as usual its the same nothing change tony still get bomb in Afghanistan same conclusion trash

welp i already read this on fanfic. ita a realy good read ,writing was almost on pro level seriously. like u guys wont disappointed. spoiler... black widow main wife and therell be a harem. through i wonder if x men was goin to introduce later? and if the harem goin to expand more? and if u goin to add more enemy aftrt thanos. i hope u goin to write narutoXDCverse. hohoho

This is an absolute masterpiece of fanfic if I have anything to say first. Writing Quality: Perfect, I can count with one hand the typos I saw in thirty-ish chapters. Excellent delivery and proper use of synonymous. Stability of Updates: Great as well. Story Development: Naruto came to Marvel to change EVERYTHING, don't spect most things to happen like the original, I love that. Character Design: Naruto is still an experienced, funny and genius Ninja. Marvel characters are also well portrayed. World Background: Totally loyal to MCU to the spec of dust. Now, my opinion: Dude, author, fam... The moment I started reading it I knew it was from fanfiction.net you only get this much quality from there. Really if most good authors of that site posted their works in this site... They would topple over the ranking in a day. I have nothing to say about this masterpiece, I only read 30 chapters and I absolutely love it, the way you describe the scenario, the suspense, tension building between characters, Naruto and Nat have a lot of chemistry, that first date lol, very Naruto kind of thing to do. I'm very expectant about the future of this novel, it says 'Harem', I love harems but just this 30 chapters made me want it to be just Natasha, but well I'm open to possibilities as long as proper drama is introduced (Don't make Natasha just accept it as if it is the most natural thing) and as long as it doesn't go to more than two or three. I also love the way Naruto handles everything, what a perfect way of using his clones and Hiraishin, his shinobi way of handling himself makes everything more interesting than most fanfic when he just transforms and gets it done. It makes tension to know how everyone will react when he could have just transformed and finished everything yet he only played the ninja around with them. This fanfic deserves top 10, U gettin' my stones from now on.

An excellent story overall Stable updates, excellent story development. Even your version of Naruto is excellent, and quite original. The only issues with the story is the frequent (but minor) spelling errors or misusing words. I typically find 2-5 errors per chapter, which is still far better than the vast majority of fanfiction writers, or original authors. As I mentioned the errors are usually fairly minor and don't detract from the story as a whole (usually stuff like mixing up "him" and "her," or "his" and "hers" or "risks" and "wrists"). On the other hand, your writing style is excellent, the dialogue flows naturally (this is very tricky for most writers to pull off, typically the difference between an average writer and a great writer), and the story doesn't feel rushed.

I'm in love with this !!! :D. "sir, may i have some more?" "Moaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar?" ~ "yes please :)."

Já li no ff, muito bom!

it's simpa I like this naruto I hope that will resuscitate hinata.

This is actually the best fan fic ive ever read. i love how you portray all the charactera as if this was mabe by their respective creators And the storytelling is on point I am stunned by this amazing fanfic

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author just updated new chapters on fanfiction .net, you guys can read there ..........................................................................................

Il miglior crossover di naruto con qualsiasi altro universo, ha un ottimo potenziale e si spera che continui così per molto tempo ancora, aspetto i capitoli ogni giorno.

Writing Quality 4/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 4/5 Character Design 4/5 World Background 5/5 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I find this novel almost perfect. I sincerely hope that the author would continue writing it and finish this novel, unlike some fan-fictions which stops abruptly.

This is good stuff, keep it up

Doing a good job so far, keep up the good work man! I hope yyou keep putting out chapters with the same amount of clarity. You made it easy to read and understand what was going on and gave a distinctive voice to everyone, mad props!

This is a good read. Thank you, [img=update]