Comments of chapter undefined of Revenge is always sweet

Gotta love it when the author adds something about intelligence while also messing up their grammar in the same sentence.

just read half the chapter but wtf is this super fast transition? Even bullets wouldn't fly fast as this story lmao. confessing, getting rejected, realization, drowning in sorrow, turning into fat ****, one year skip and getting bullied, promising to get revenge , getting fit from fat... literally with in few paragraphs.. I'm scared to read further.

Sorry About english not being my first language

One second hes fat the next hes banging some girl im mad confused rn 💃

Can see the potential in this. Peoblem is, people/writers sometimes forget that there's a free web app to fix grammar issues. Heck, if you want to paraphrase something, there's even a web app for that. I'll keep reading this until the end, I hope it gets better or at least more enjoyable to read. Sorry for Bitching about grammar when I'm still in (technically) the first chapter of the novel. Hope I didn't rub you the wrong way.

Exp

This... what the **** is this...

So far it's really good, thanks for the chapter ☺️

Ty

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Keep going please 🤩👌

Thanks for the chapters!

lmao, thats how you do it