Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Alpha Prime

while i like the tournament chapters so far this one really wasn't good. Not from a content standpoint but from how it was put into words. Besides a gazillion tense mistakes (more than any previous chapter) the narration felt very passive and detached which made it feel very flat and unintriguing. I'd suggest going through the chapter and adjusting the sentences to more active verb forms e.g. 'he charged up'-->'charging up'.

Though there are many unnecessary words, it's still a good chapter! You can re-check this chapter's grammar Author. And Thank you for the update👍🏻

I have school on Monday and not Tuesday ;-:

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Loved the chapter

Loved the chapter

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thank you author

lezzzgooo

Great Chapter!

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Thanks for the chapter :D

Yolo thxs for the chapter!!!